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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Chronological order

Hi,

"Barely had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down after delivering a keynote address to the world governing body's congress than a critical email from the European Clubs Association was already hitting the inboxes of journalists in the hall." [The Independent.]

What is chronological order of actions in the sentence?

Is it:

1. "...delivering a keynote address..."

2."...had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down..."

3."...a critical email from the European Clubs Association was already hitting the inboxes...", or

1. "...delivering a keynote address..."

2. "...had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down..." and "...a critical email from the European Clubs Association was already hitting the inboxes..." occurring simultaneously?

Thank you.
  

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The first one is the correct sequence of events, because he had sat down - the action was complete, but I find the usage of "than" instead of "before" or "when" troubling, and past progressive after past perfect is quite confusing temporally. Maybe: Barely had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down after delivering a keynote address to the congress of the world governing body, when a critical email from the European Clubs Association hit the inboxes of journalists in the hall.

  • The first one is the correct sequence of events, because he had sat down - the action was complete, but I find the usage of "than" instead of "before" or "when" troubling, and past progressive after past perfect is quite confusing temporally.
  • Maybe: Barely had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down after delivering a keynote address to the congress of the world governing body, when a critical email from the European Clubs Association hit the inboxes of journalists in the hall.
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The first one is the correct sequence of events, because he had sat down - the action was complete,

but I find the usage of "than" instead of "before" or "when" troubling, and past progressive after past perfect is quite confusing temporally.

Maybe:

Barely had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down after delivering a keynote address to the congress of the world govern
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Anonymous"Barely had the Fifa president Sepp Blatter sat down after delivering a keynote address to the world governing body's congress than a critical email from the European Clubs Association was already hitting the inboxes of journalists in the hall." [The Independent.]
What is chronological order of actions in the sentence?
1. Blatter delivered the ad

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