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Pieter Posted 23 years ago

Christ

Christ


Tired are the nails in your hands.
You’re still breathing, without logic, rhythmless.
Disintegrated.

You swear at us, bless them with love, Holy Trinity.
Mothers with sons, girls with lovers, bird with a branch.
Dreams with infinity.

Human blood, human pain, holy death, holy soul.
Murmuring mercy crucified.
Truth and life. All.
  

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you never fail to surprise me! So graphic and thought evoking in such few words. Truth and Life.

  • you never fail to surprise me!
  • So graphic and thought evoking in such few words.
  • Truth and Life.
  • All.
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This one is impressive.......you never fail to surprise me!
So graphic and thought evoking in such few words.
Truth and Life. All.
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I don't think this topic would interest a lot of students. It would have to be used in sth related to religion.
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Friends I have to tell you that i couldn't find a proper end for this one. My father died 6 months ago, at 78, and at his funeral I heard the priest saying it for a few times and I suddenly realised this was it: Truth and life . All. I'm not a catholic though. I just told you that sometimes creation, and art can be such an obsession for artist that...
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I am sorry to hear about your father's death. However, I had the feeling your true feelings were not in the poem. I must be crazy saying things like this to you! I can always delete this post tomorrow. Tell me if you think I should. Do you have any more poems for tonight?
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Maj, one of the major criteria of intelligence is how many antagonist , ideas, concepts can reside in your brain. The single real genious Hungarian poet of the *** Century, Attila Jozsef ( 1932-37) reading his poems, can be considered communist and liberal, European and nationalist, deeply Catholic and anticlerical, believer and ateist, love and hatred...
"...Come my dear freedom, you give
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dear Pieter, I must be completely wrong about the poem but it lacks feelings for me. What can I say?It doesn't "involve" my feelings. Sorry. It may work out for lots of people. Woodward liked it. I am totally sure Hitch will agree with him. So it's two to one. Don't bother about my opinion.
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" Where freedom is the order, a bit
I'm always feeling the infinite." Both are my translations. Maj, I hope you'll like this one.

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