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Pvunderink Posted 12 years ago
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Choosing between two sentences.
Can someone please help me out with this one.
I've got two sentences, but I'm not sure if one is better than the other.
Are the both right? Which sounds better?
Sentence 1:
This paper provides an empirical evaluation of the impact of infrastructural development on the economies of developing countries.
Sentence 2:
This paper provides an empirical evaluation of the impact of infrastructural development on economic performance in developing countries.
I've got two sentences, but I'm not sure if one is better than the other.
Are the both right? Which sounds better?
Sentence 1:
This paper provides an empirical evaluation of the impact of infrastructural development on the economies of developing countries.
Sentence 2:
This paper provides an empirical evaluation of the impact of infrastructural development on economic performance in developing countries.
Top answer
I'm not really familiar with the jargon of the field, but the first seems better to me.
- I'm not really familiar with the jargon of the field, but the first seems better to me.
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I'm not really familiar with the jargon of the field, but the first seems better to me.
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