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Akki Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
Choose between 2 sentences.
0 Hello, 02 br
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00 Kindly read the exerpt below to deterimine the grammar of each. 02 br
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00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coupons which will entice customer to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to: $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month, 00 which differs from the corporation's current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent. (is the highlighted part gramatically correct?). 02 br
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00 Did the above sound better or is this a better way of saying it: 02 br
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00 which differs from our current $10 back for every $200 spent, offered to customers now. 02 br
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00 I appreciate your opinion regarding the highlighted part. 0-
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00 Kindly read the exerpt below to deterimine the grammar of each. 02 br
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00 ABC stores will offer discounts and coupons which will entice customer to step inside our stores. Offers include, but are not limited to: $10 gift certificates upon spending $100 in a particular month, 00 which differs from the corporation's current offer of $10 back for every $200 spent. (is the highlighted part gramatically correct?). 02 br
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00 Did the above sound better or is this a better way of saying it: 02 br
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00 which differs from our current $10 back for every $200 spent, offered to customers now. 02 br
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00 I appreciate your opinion regarding the highlighted part. 0-
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0 Yours aren't bad, but I prefer: 01 i 00 which differs from our current offer of $10 back for every $20 spent 02 i 00 . 02 br
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