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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Chocolate quotatio, pls. check the grammar

"Given enough time, even the sweetest chocolate, if left unscathed, expires."

Kindly check my grammar.
Revisions/improvements would be appreciated.

thank you
  

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" Kindly check my grammar. The grammarseems OK, but I have trouble understanding the meaning. How does chocolate expire?

— Clive

  • " Kindly check my grammar.
  • The grammarseems OK, but I have trouble understanding the meaning.
  • How does chocolate expire?
  • What does it mean to say that chocolate is left unscathed?
  • Revisions/improvements would be appreciated.
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Hi,
"Given enough time, even the sweetest chocolate, if left unscathed, expires."

Kindly check my grammar. The grammarseems OK, but I have trouble understanding the meaning.
How does chocolate expire?
What does it mean to
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Thank you.

Maybe the phrase "if left unscathed" needs revision?
Any other better phrase?
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Hi,

It's a nice phrase.I just don't know what you're trying to say.

How does chocolate expiire?

Clive
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The chocolate expires if left unscathed for some given time?

Haha, sorry if the meaning is quite ambiguous. I just think that it may need rephrasing and more appropriate words.
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Hi,

It's not ambiguous. 'Ambiguous' means that one can see two meanings in it.
I can't see any meaning.
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