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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

chirping ...whirring

0 Where are you? There are birds chirping in the background and the sound of a fan whirring.02br
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0 As a matter of style, I think I'd put "where are you?" at the end.02br
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00Edit: eliminate some syllables, and I think you have a fairly good 01i00haiku.02i00 0-
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