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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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Chinese New Year
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Chinese New Year is very an important festival for / to Meng. Last Monday, his family woke up early in the morning. They all put on new clothes. Later they went to grandfather's house for a visit on / during Chinese New Year.
On New Year's Day, his auties and uncles were present for the reunion dinner too. They felt happy to meet Meng's family. Meng and his sisters greeted them with a Happy chinese New Year. At night, they sat (together) around tehe table for dinner. They all enjoyed chatting while eating happily.
There were lots of delicious food on the table. They had a nine-course meal and ice cream for dessert. After an hour, they went out to watch the colourful fireworks. It was an enjoyable time for Meng's family.
Chinese New Year is very an important festival for / to Meng. Last Monday, his family woke up early in the morning. They all put on new clothes. Later they went to grandfather's house for a visit on / during Chinese New Year.
On New Year's Day, his auties and uncles were present for the reunion dinner too. They felt happy to meet Meng's family. Meng and his sisters greeted them with a Happy chinese New Year. At night, they sat (together) around tehe table for dinner. They all enjoyed chatting while eating happily.
There were lots of delicious food on the table. They had a nine-course meal and ice cream for dessert. After an hour, they went out to watch the colourful fireworks. It was an enjoyable time for Meng's family.
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A pretty good job. I've made selections where you indicated a choice and made corrections to actual errors. Chinese New Year is a very an important festival to Meng.
- A pretty good job.
- I've made selections where you indicated a choice and made corrections to actual errors.
- Chinese New Year is a very an important festival to Meng.
- Last Monday, his family woke up early in the morning.
- They all put on new clothes.
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A pretty good job. I've made selections where you indicated a choice and made corrections to actual errors.
Chinese New Year is a veryan important festival to Meng. Last Monday, his family woke up early in the morning. They all put on new clothes. Later
Chinese New Year is a very
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