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Neyoneyo Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
Children's Letter
Hi, I live in the U.K. but still struggling English expression.
I'm trying to wirte a 'Thank you letter' on behalf of my 5year old son.
Can someone help changing my business-like English to sweet children's English ?
Thanks !!! ==
How lovely of you sending me a lovely Christmas present. I was so pleased
with it as well as your thoughtfulness !
Regrettably, I've been too busy to play with the toys lately.
On weekend, I normally go out and enjoy a theatre play.
So, if you are kindly sending me a present in future, could I request you a
theatre tokens instead of toys, please ?
Thank you again.=
I'm trying to wirte a 'Thank you letter' on behalf of my 5year old son.
Can someone help changing my business-like English to sweet children's English ?
Thanks !!! ==
How lovely of you sending me a lovely Christmas present. I was so pleased
with it as well as your thoughtfulness !
Regrettably, I've been too busy to play with the toys lately.
On weekend, I normally go out and enjoy a theatre play.
So, if you are kindly sending me a present in future, could I request you a
theatre tokens instead of toys, please ?
Thank you again.=
Top answer
forging a letter from a 5 year old asking for theatre tokens! Do you think it will work? Seriously, get the kid to draw a picture instead - they know the letter isn't coming from him anyway - and just put 'thanks for the pressie, love 'kids' name' on the bottom of it.
- forging a letter from a 5 year old asking for theatre tokens!
- Do you think it will work?
- Seriously, get the kid to draw a picture instead - they know the letter isn't coming from him anyway - and just put 'thanks for the pressie, love 'kids' name' on the bottom of it.
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Ha nice try...forging a letter from a 5 year old asking for theatre tokens! Do you think it will work?
Seriously, get the kid to draw a picture instead - they know the letter isn't coming from him anyway - and just put 'thanks for the pressie, love 'kids' name' on the bottom of it.
Seriously, get the kid to draw a picture instead - they know the letter isn't coming from him anyway - and just put 'thanks for the pressie, love 'kids' name' on the bottom of it.
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Thank you very much for your reply. Yes, what you're saying is true....
I do really appreciate those who send him a presents ,but my son is not really interested in them, and most of the toys just end up in a charity shop. This has been going on for a last couple of years and I don't want see this will be going on for more years..... What he really wants is a shopping voucher which al
I do really appreciate those who send him a presents ,but my son is not really interested in them, and most of the toys just end up in a charity shop. This has been going on for a last couple of years and I don't want see this will be going on for more years..... What he really wants is a shopping voucher which al
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Well, this is an English forum and not an ettiquette one, but I would be offended if I got that letter. I agree with Nona - just have him draw a picture and write his name, and I'm sure he can write the words "Thank you."
Then YOU can include a note with his picture saying something like "It's very considerate of you to remember [your son's name] and we appreciate your thoughtfulness, bu
Then YOU can include a note with his picture saying something like "It's very considerate of you to remember [your son's name] and we appreciate your thoughtfulness, bu
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I do appreciate your advice & opinion.
It seems be very offensive to send this kind of letter to people in Western culture, so I'll go ahead just sending a letter with my son't picture & the word ' Thank you' as suggested.
Yes, this is an English forum and not an ettiquette one, but I often face the case that can not be resolved by just "language translation"....... Sould
It seems be very offensive to send this kind of letter to people in Western culture, so I'll go ahead just sending a letter with my son't picture & the word ' Thank you' as suggested.
Yes, this is an English forum and not an ettiquette one, but I often face the case that can not be resolved by just "language translation"....... Sould
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