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Lykers Posted 13 years ago
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children festival

The contemporary children seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the proximity of the Festival.

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lykers The contemporary children seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the proximity of the Festival. Contemporary children / (The) children of today seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the time of the Festival approaches.

  • lykers The contemporary children seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the proximity of the Festival.
  • Contemporary children / (The) children of today seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the time of the Festival approaches.
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lykersThe contemporary children seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the proximity of the Festival.
Contemporary children / (The) children of today seem to be less excited than the children of their parents' era as the time of the Festival
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From the dictionary the word proximity can be used to talk about the time or space, so I'm wondering why it is not appropriate to use it here?

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