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Army5 Posted 16 years ago
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Hi, please correct the following paragraph. Thank you.
Mesmerized by movies, and growing in no-holds-barred ultra-tech worlds, which preach a neo-materialism, the twenty-first century youth grow like bushes in wilderness having no souls around them to tend their growth.
Mesmerized by movies, and growing in no-holds-barred ultra-tech worlds, which preach a neo-materialism, the twenty-first century youth grow like bushes in wilderness having no souls around them to tend their growth.
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Mesmerized by movies and growing up in a no-holds-barred, ultra-tech world which preaches neo-materialism, the twenty-first century youth grow like shrubs in the wilderness, having no one to tend their growth.
- Mesmerized by movies and growing up in a no-holds-barred, ultra-tech world which preaches neo-materialism, the twenty-first century youth grow like shrubs in the wilderness, having no one to tend their growth.
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Mesmerized by movies and growing up in a no-holds-barred, ultra-tech world which preaches neo-materialism, the twenty-first century youth grow like shrubs in the wilderness, having no one to tend their growth.
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