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Chiara Posted 19 years ago
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0Writing is very difficult for me, could you please check this essay for me?02br
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00thanks a lot for what you can do,02br
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00Chiara02br
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00(if it's too long, I can make is shorter)02br
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00Competition:02br
00Should we travel alone, with friends or with family?02br
00What are the benefits of each and are there any disadvantages?02br
00Write and tell us what you think.02br
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00In the last decades travelling has become one of the most favourite activity of people of modern societies and one of the expenses they enjoy to make the most.02br
00The widening of communications and transport, and the consequent rising of a much more competitive tourism’s market, has determined a massive growth of tourism towards all the five continents. 02br
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00But although people of different countries, sex, age, and cultural and social backgrounds, share the same love of knowing a new place, they might not share the same way of travelling.02br
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00In fact some people prefer travelling with their friends, others with their family and others alone. 02br
00Let’s see some differences.02br
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00Wherever we are going, travelling with our friends usually seems to be great fun and allows us to share emotions and thoughts about the new experience with the people we like. Just make sure that you really get on well, or it could result a very disappointing experience!02br
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00Another possibility is travelling with our family. After a tough year of work and school, it can result one of the few moments in which we really enjoy family life. Just be careful about your sons’ never ending requests which can easily kill your holiday! 02br
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00Besides these two types of travelling, always many more people choose to travel alone.02br
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00Firstly because travelling accompanied by other people limits our curiosity towards the country we are visiting and weakens the sense of discovery and mystery of our trip.02br
00In contrast ravelling alone pushes us to know more closely and carefully the culture we meet and 02br
00consecuently to get in touch with different sides of our self. In fact it’s always worth to remember that the first meaning of travelling is overtaking our everyday limits and boundaries and “travelling” is one of the word we more frequently use in our definition of “life”. 02br
00It’s true that sometime being alone for too long results to be boring, but, besides local people, we can meet many other travellers which possibly become our friends.02br
00Finally it’s undeniable that travelling alone is more dangerous and risky, but paying attention and avoiding silly risks, it’s an experience that is surely worth to try. 0-
  

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02br 00The widening of communication01font 00_02font 00 and transport, and the consequent rising of a much more competitive tourism’s market, has determined a massive growth of tourism towards all the five continents. 02br 02br 00In fact01font 00,02font 00 some people prefer travelling with their friends, others with their family and others alone. 02br 02br 00Wherever we are going, travelling with our friends usually seems to be great fun and allows us to share emotions and thoughts about the new experience with the people we like.

  • 02br 00The widening of communication01font 00_02font 00 and transport, and the consequent rising of a much more competitive tourism’s market, has determined a massive growth of tourism towards all the five continents.
  • 02br 02br 00In fact01font 00,02font 00 some people prefer travelling with their friends, others with their family and others alone.
  • 02br 02br 00Wherever we are going, travelling with our friends usually seems to be great fun and allows us to share emotions and thoughts about the new experience with the people we like.
  • 02br 02br 00Another possibility is travelling with our family.
  • After a tough year of work and school, it can result one of the few moments in which we really enjoy family life.
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0Writing is very difficult for me, could you please check this essay for me?02br
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00thanks a lot for what you can do,02br
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00Chiara02br
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00(if it's too long, I can make is shorter)02br
02br
00Competition:02br
00Should we travel alone, with friends or with family?02br
00What are the
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0Hello The leaves, you have been very kind to correct my writing: thanks a lot!02br
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00I will remember your advise no to write too long sentences. It can help me also to avoid making mistakes.02br
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00Ther's only one this correction I don't understand: 02br
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0Hello Feebs, thank you very much for your corrections. (May I say this? Is there any other way to say it?)02br
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00 May I ask few questions, please: 02br
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01cite10Chiara12cite10Hello Feebs, thank you very much for your corrections. (May I say this? Is there any other way to say it?)12br
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0Hello Feebs, thank you very much.You' have been very nice. 02br
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00Your explanations of "beware", "overcome" are very useful for me.02br
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00I thought "which" was fine with plural nouns of people... I need to practice.02br
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00Thank you! 02br
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00Chiara0-

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