Hello! Is the underlined expression OK? Does it sound right?
By using a curve dilator and targeted wire-guided chest tube technique in clinical practice we expect a more precise drain insertion by which we hope to achieve a more successful, simpler and safer chest drain techniques than those used so far.
Thank you in advance.
Top answer
"a ... technique s " is wrong. However, it doesn't sound quite right to me even when this is fixed.
— GPY
"a ...
technique s " is wrong.
However, it doesn't sound quite right to me even when this is fixed.
You are essentially saying that by using one particular techniqiue you hope to achieve more successful technique(s).
I'm not sure that is logical.
Free · every Monday
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
However, it doesn't sound quite right to me even when this is fixed. You are essentially saying that by using one particular techniqiue you hope to achieve more successful technique(s). I'm not sure that is logical.
By using a curve dilator and targeted wire-guided chest tube technique in clinical practice we expect a more precise drain insertion, which we hope will result in simpler, safer and more successful procedures to drain the chest cavitythan those used so far.