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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Chek this passage that I wrote.

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00This matter isn't confined to the specific company. 02br
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00The relationship among several companies would be broken off. 02br
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00Moreover it is revealed in many cases that the whole industry forming economy of a country and the world economy could be influenced.02br
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00I think the last sentence is unnatural...isn't it?0-
  

Top answer

0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00This matter isn't confined to the specific company. 02br 02br 01font 00The relationship among several companies would be broken off. 02font 00 Yes, I think you should try to rewrite it.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00This matter isn't confined to the specific company.
  • 02br 02br 01font 00The relationship among several companies would be broken off.
  • 02font 00 Yes, I think you should try to rewrite it.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00This matter isn't confined to the specific company. 02font00Are you talking about one company or many companies?02br
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01font00The relationship among several companies would be broken off. 02font00On what condition would it be broken off?02br
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0Thank you for your nice explanation Clive.02br
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00I'll correct these sentences more clear way.0-
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