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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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0Living in a forign land02br
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00I think that learning can be done in many ways.one of them is to visit a place where you have not been before,meet the people,taste their food,observe their culture and traditions and many many more.owning their good habits and learning from their bad habits are also a process of learning.02br
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00i love to visit around the globe,meet and befriended with different people,learn their languages and know their culture and traditions.02br
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00being in a forign land gives me the chance to be with the people of a system different from me.i will learn not only from their living style but from their style of public training from thier government side.02br
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00somebody says that ones childern is getting out of control,but i believe that having a strong family background can never bring any disturbance in ones family system,no matter whereever you are,in the world.02br
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00there fore in conclusion i can say that if not for living,at least for visiting one should visit aplace where one was never before.in a year.02br
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00thanks02br
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00mariam0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00I took a very, very quick look. My first suggestion is that you need to edit this to use capital letters correctly. 02br 02br 00You don't seem to like capital letters.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00I took a very, very quick look.
  • My first suggestion is that you need to edit this to use capital letters correctly.
  • 02br 02br 00You don't seem to like capital letters.
  • 05002br 02br 00Best wishes,Clive010id1
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0Hi,02br
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00I took a very, very quick look. My first suggestion is that you need to edit this to use capital letters correctly. Can you do that, and then repost it?02br
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00You don't seem to like capital letters. 05002br
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00Best wishes,Clive010id1
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0You better start thinking before writing. I takes a lot of time and it seems so boring. I read your letter, and the way you wrote it the reader will just turn it finish right away. You should know how to use capital letters, check your spelling and grammar.But your experiences will help you learn and improve your language skills.0-

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