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Believer Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Check/rewrite sentences

I have two clauses/sentences in bullet form. Would you check/rewrite them? Can you do away with commas?

ZZ Institute in Motion

A. Bible classes by level taught by Christians of Korean national origin.

B. Wall mold removal project complete.
  

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Bullet style statements cannot be checked individually-- the key point is that all of a set should exhibit the same grammar: A. Project begun B. Project revised C.

— Mister Micawber

  • Bullet style statements cannot be checked individually-- the key point is that all of a set should exhibit the same grammar: A.
  • Project begun B.
  • Project revised C.
  • Project complete.
  • or A.
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Bullet style statements cannot be checked individually-- the key point is that all of a set should exhibit the same grammar:

A. Project begun
B. Project revised
C. Project complete.

or

A. Initiation of the XYZ Project
B. Revision of the project's time schedule
C. Completion of XYZ Project
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