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Virginia274 Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Checking the context errors.

Hi everyone,

This is one paragraph that one of my friend has written. Could anyone please check the context and fix its errors?
Any help is really appreciated.

This is the context:

As human life is evolving day by day, consumption of energy is also increasing with the same rate or we can say it more. All the factors of life from birth till death surrounded by energy. But nowadays sources of conventional energy are getting lesser and lesser therefore people are trying different alternates using method of conservation of energy form conventional sources which are also echo friendly too and easily available. Our project is based on energy generated, which is eco-friendly project as it doesn’t need any type of fuel or produces any type of by product. When flow of traffic passes over speed breakers usually energy get wasted. Techniques which is being used here is to utilize that energy through rank and pinion mechanism in which potential energy of traffic can be converted into mechanical energy through moving shafts which is connected to an electricity generators. This makes speed breaker a power generating unit. This method can save energy. Energy which is saved from this can be utilized in many different things like street lights, traffic signal and many other purposes.

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virginia274 Could anyone please check the con t ext and fix its errors? virginia274 This is the con t ext: As societies continue to develop, human life is evolving day by day, the consumption of energy is also increasin g, with at the same rate or often faster. we can say it more.

  • virginia274 Could anyone please check the con t ext and fix its errors?
  • virginia274 This is the con t ext: As societies continue to develop, human life is evolving day by day, the consumption of energy is also increasin g, with at the same rate or often faster.
  • we can say it more.
  • All the factors Moreover, many aspects of the modern life style, from birth till death cradle to grave, require the use of surrounded by energy.
  • But nowadays However, the natural sources of conventional energy are diminishing.
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virginia274Could anyone please check the con text and fix its errors?
virginia274This is the con text:
As societies continue to develop, human life is evolving day by day, the consumption of energy is also increasing, with at the same rate

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