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Jumanah Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Checking paragraph

I'm writing a descriptive paragraph.
Can you please tell me if there're any mistakes in this paragraph.
My darling father
My father may not be well-known, but anyone wanting to know him well will love him.My father is an Arabic professor at the university of Imam.My father is a generous person because he likes helping others either his friends or his neighbors. My father is so soft-hearted and friendly.He is sometimes up the wall because of the students he teaches them.Finally, anyone wanting to know my father well will know how much soft-hearted he is.
  

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My father may not be wel l k nown, but anyone wanting who gets to know him well will love him . M y father is an Arabic a professor of Arabic at the U niversity of Ima m. M y father is a generous person because he likes helping others either including his friends or his and neighbor s.

  • My father may not be wel l k nown, but anyone wanting who gets to know him well will love him .
  • M y father is an Arabic a professor of Arabic at the U niversity of Ima m.
  • M y father is a generous person because he likes helping others either including his friends or his and neighbor s.
  • M y father is so very sof t h earted and friendl y.
  • H e is sometimes up the wall because of irritated by the students he teach es.
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My father may not be well known, but anyone wanting who gets to know him well will love him. My father is an Arabic a professor of Arabic at the University of Imam. My father is a generous person because he likes helping others either including his friends or his and neighbors. My fath
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Do you mean when I say "anyone wanting to know..." , and "my father is sometimes up the wall because of..." are grammatically incorrect?

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