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Laephy Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Checking mistakes

Hi! I am writing a small description for the update of my program and I am not sure if it is grammatically correct. Please could someone check my text for mistakes?

My Text:
In this version, it is possible to select one of the defined materials or to insert a new material given the thermal conductivity value for different temperatures.
Windows Vista and Windows 7 do not support .hlp files natively. We have updated the program Help file to .chm help files which are supported by all windows systems.
Thank you very much for your help.
Laura
  

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In this version, it is possible to select one of the defined materials or to insert a new material given the thermal conductivity value for different temperatures. hlp fi les. chm help files , which are supported by all Windows systems.

  • In this version, it is possible to select one of the defined materials or to insert a new material given the thermal conductivity value for different temperatures.
  • hlp fi les.
  • chm help files , which are supported by all Windows systems.
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In this version, it is possible to select one of the defined materials or to insert a new material given the thermal conductivity value for different temperatures. Standard Windows Vista and Windows 7 do not support .hlp files. We have updated the program Help file to .chm help files, which are supported by all Windows systems.
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I would think that his usage of natively would stand, given that he change the sentence to "Windows Vista and Windows 7 do not natively support .hlp files".
I find that this sentence sounds more true, seeing as "Standard" may give one the wrong impression of Windows operating systems in that any new thing added (a program or codec which would add support for .hlp files, for example) would mak
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Yes, I now see that 'natively', as odd as it sounds, is actually used in computer-speak:

17. Computers

a.designed for use with a specific type of computer: writing native applications for 32-bit PCs.

b.internal to a specific application program: to view the file in its native format.

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