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In this paper, numerical study of dynamic behavior and heat transfer combination of fluid boundary layer of Pavrla Non-Newtonian under constant flux during the channel wall, the analysis of entropy production parameters has been studied. Velosity profiles input to channel according to the Non-Newtonian of fluid as parabolic and temperature profile as uniform is considered. Quiet Fluid flow, is considered as two-dimensional and non-density.Due to the assumptions, formulation of Vortisity-stream function used for the formulation of the problem. Final equations are resolved as finite differences method. Effect of normal heat transfer with forced convention has been studied in above conditions. Eventually local Nusselt manner and mean Nusselt , coefficient of friction, velosity and temperature profiles, entropy production parameters and rate of deviation from Newtonian according to fluid changes in the Prandtl, Richardson, and especially changes in Non-Newtonian fluid index completely has been discussed.

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Kabel · Accepted Answer

Hi SunnyShiny

This is just my opinion, so please if someone has better ideas please chip in!

I would suggest very subtle changes to layout and words as follows, just so that the sentences flow better:

In this paper, the following have been studied; numerical observation of dynamic behavior and heat transfer combination of fluid boundary layer of Pavrla Non-Newtonian under constant flux during the channel wall, and the analysis of entropy production parameters.

[not quite sure what this means, so I'm guessing this still says the same thing, but please check!]

Velosity profiles input to the channel according to the Non-Newtonian of fluid, as parabolic and temperature characteristics are considered.

Quiet Fluid flow, is considered as two-dimensional and non-density. Due to the assumptions, formulation of Vortisity-stream function is used for the formulation of the problem. Final equations are resolved using the finite differences method. The effect of normal heat transfer with forced convention has been studied in the above conditions.

[Why Eventually? Could Finally be better here?]

Eventually local Nusselt manner and mean Nusselt , coefficient of friction, velosity and temperature profiles, entropy production parameters and rate of deviation from Newtonian according to fluid changes in the Prandtl, Richardson, and especially changes in Non-Newtonian fluid index completely has been discussed.

[This sentence is particularly long, and whilst it makes sense, I would consider making it into 2 sentences if possible]

Hope it helps a bit!

Kabel

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