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Egyptian2007 Posted 18 years ago
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Check this statement

0Could somebody please check this statement for me.02br
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01i01b00“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I will have a feeling of belonging to the school and then I will participate effectively. But if my salary suffices me for only one week or ten days, then I will end up losing such a 00 00feeling and I will lose my interest in everything. Why should I participate while I’m struggling in my life?! Financial matters are very important in any kind of job…All other obstacles can be overcome if this one is sorted out.”02b02i00 0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00Here are a couple of very, very minor edits. 02br 02br 00Are you sure you want to tell your boss that you won't do your job well if you don't get a pay increase? 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01i 01b 00“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I will have a feeling of belonging to the school and then I will participate effectively.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00Here are a couple of very, very minor edits.
  • 02br 02br 00Are you sure you want to tell your boss that you won't do your job well if you don't get a pay increase?
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01i 01b 00“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I will have a feeling of belonging to the school and then I will participate effectively.
  • But if my salary suffices me for only a week or ten days, then I will end up losing such a 00 00feeling, and I will lose my interest in everything.
  • Why should I participate while I’m struggling in my life?
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0Hi,02br
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00Are you sure you want to tell your boss that you won't do your job well if you don't get a pay increase? 02br
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00Best wishes, Clive02br
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01i01b00“If I receive a suitable salary with which I can maintain a decent life, I wil
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0Thanks very much Clive.02br
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00By the way, this is not a statement of my own, even though I agree with it.The statement was given by one of my interviewees.0-
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