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James do Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Check this sentence for me please

"Therefore, not only can the system supply high power light as a lighting system, it can also supply a broadband link for the wireless communication."

Can you tell me if my sentence is correct. I want to talk about a system that untertake two function: illuminating and communication. With the illuminating function, my system can supply high power light. With the communication function, my system can supply a broadbank link. Does my sentence express correctly my idea? Or can you fix it for me.

Thank you!
  

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Is your system composed of wires or optical fibre or a cable containing both? I suspect the first option. I also assume your system requires additional light sources and a wireless router or are they part of the system?

  • Is your system composed of wires or optical fibre or a cable containing both?
  • I suspect the first option.
  • I also assume your system requires additional light sources and a wireless router or are they part of the system?
  • If only wires then : Therefore, not only can the system supply power for lighting, it also acts as a broadband link for (the) wireless data communications.
  • If only optical fibre : Therefore, not only can the system supply lighting, it also acts as a broadband link for (the)wireless data communications.
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Is your system composed of wires or optical fibre or a cable containing both? I suspect the first option.

I also assume your system requires additional light sources and a wireless router or are they part of the system?

If only wires then: Therefore, not only can the system supply power for lighting, it also acts as a broadband link for (the) wireless data communications.
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thank you very much!

My system is a visible light communication system. In my system, the light radiated from white LEDs will supply light as a lighting system. And the information will be transfered through the light. That's why I said my system undertake both function: illumination and communication.

I don't know but it seems that your sentence doesn't express exactly my idea.
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You are correct. There are many words and to find the best words for your purpose can difficult. You are looking to paint a picture with words and every word has a slightly different meaning to everyone. You know your audience best. I will give a few more options below. You can of course recombine or change the various phrases.

This system delivers powerful yet efficient lighting while si

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