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Hi there, could somebody check this persuasive paragraph for me?
The topic is Euthanasia
Euthanasia is an unmerciful and offensive way of taking away others' lives, and nothing more than killing. No one has the right to take away what they can't give back. Humans' lives are more valuable than all money. With modern medical developments, people don't have to suffer from pain until death because most diseases can now be dealt with. Instead, they can coexist with their diseases and do their daily activities. In addition, no one can commit murder especially against their relatives and beloved ones. Life is god's gift and can be an examination from him to test our belief that life is ephemeal. No one has the right to take away the life of another one due to his compassion toward him because this can cause corruption in society and make people's lives worthless. In brief, whatever the reason is, committing murder is immoral and insane.