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TheGrey Posted 20 years ago
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0 Could you check this, please?02br
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00 Hi Robert, 02br
00 it’s been a while since we wrote, so I thought to write to you to up to date about my news.02br
00 I’m out of work at moment, I left my job some months ago to follow two programming courses of Computer Science.02br
00 A couple of weeks ago I did two exams with good results, and now I’m going to study English. I will take it on June. I hope to take it, especially if you’ll help me. 02br
00 What’s news about you? What will you do Friday? The S. Patrick’s day is a big show and I guess that you will have a lot of fun. Don’t forget to have a Guinness for me!02br
00 This year I cannot be there, so I would ask to you to take many pictures of the event.02br
00 How is Justine? I remember she got a new job as a post office’s employer, is it right?02br
00 I would show her some pictures of Rome where I went on December. When do you think to come in Italy? There are some friends of mine that could lodge for a month. 02br
00 I would send many regards to your parents and give thanks to gave me hospitality last summer. 02br
00 This year I think to come in Kildare where I would like to stay for a week then, if you are free with your job, we must make a visit to Mr. Maurice, I have been fond of his irony last summer. 02br
00 Write soon.02br
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00 Best wishes02br
00 sergio0-
  

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0Hi, 02br 02br 00here is the letter with corrections. I usually show changes in bold, but the editor does not seem to be working with this post. I hope this is OK for you.

  • 0Hi, 02br 02br 00here is the letter with corrections.
  • I usually show changes in bold, but the editor does not seem to be working with this post.
  • I hope this is OK for you.
  • 02br 00I’m 00not working00 at moment, I left my job some months ago to follow two00 Computer programming courses.
  • 00A couple of weeks ago I did two exams 00and got00 good results.
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0Hi, 02br
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00here is the letter with corrections. I usually show changes in bold, but the editor does not seem to be working with this post. I hope this is OK for you. If there is anything you are not sure about, let me know.02br
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00- Nick02br
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00Hi Robert, 02br
00It’s been a while since we wrote, so I thought 0
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0 thanks a lot , Nick0-

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