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TnG Posted 15 years ago
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Check this paragraph for any mistake.

Hi,

I am introducing my friend miche.

Here is miche. She is from Iran. She has completed her bachlor degree in psychology from Iran. simultaneously she had worked in a tea company for 4 years. Right now she is pursuing master degree in micro-biology in Inidia. she likes swimming, travelling, cooking, etc.

I want you to check this paragraph for any mistake. please help on this.

Thanks & Regards,
  

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You had better say; Here is M iche. She is from Iran. She has completed her bachlor 's degree in psychology from Iran.

  • You had better say; Here is M iche.
  • She is from Iran.
  • She has completed her bachlor 's degree in psychology from Iran.
  • She had worked in a tea company for 4 years during her bachelor's.
  • Right now she is doing her maste r's degree in micro-biology in India.
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You had better say;

Here is Miche. She is from Iran. She has completed her bachlor's degree in psychology from Iran. She had worked in a tea company for 4 years during her bachelor's. Right now she is doing her master's degree in micro-biology in India.

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