To be honest, I can't figure out what some of your lines mean. For example, what does "in rush" mean in "Nor gentle voice of mine in rush"? Also, "Thou assume all is possible,/Neglecting the obvious threat" sounds very modern other than the "thou" in the beginning of the sentence.
— Julielai
To be honest, I can't figure out what some of your lines mean.
For example, what does "in rush" mean in "Nor gentle voice of mine in rush"?
Also, "Thou assume all is possible,/Neglecting the obvious threat" sounds very modern other than the "thou" in the beginning of the sentence.
You may want to keep your language more consistent.
(Disclaimer: I know next to nothing about poetry.
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To be honest, I can't figure out what some of your lines mean. For example, what does "in rush" mean in "Nor gentle voice of mine in rush"?
Also, "Thou assume all is possible,/Neglecting the obvious threat" sounds very modern other than the "thou" in the beginning of the sentence. You may want to keep your language more consistent.
Julielai, thanks for the comment...My explanation for the use of "Thou" "Thee" and ya know all that old English there is that I'm not mastering it well. I only experiment with it and hope that someone could teach me more about Old English...I gotta crush on it.
About the use of "rush" in line 6 Nor gentle voice of mine in rush is that imagine the situation where all people doing t