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Waterworld Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Check this cover letter plz

To
XXX,
xxxx.

Sir/Madam,
I am interested in exploring the possibility of seeking employment with your organization. Please find my resume enclosed, it will furnish you with the details relevant to my education and skills. References and any other information you require shall be promptly provided upon your request.
To develop my career as a Software Engineer where I will be a valuable team member, contributing quality ideas and work for an organization where there is an ample scope for individual as well as organization growth in Software Design and Development. My work ethic is founded on a 'what-ever-it-takes' attitude and diligent persistence to ensure all projects are completely fulfilled to the utmost.
I look forward to discussing how my knowledge and experience may be beneficial to your organization.

Sincerely,
SSSS.
  

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Here are some suggested corrections: Sir/Madam, I am interested in employment with your organization. Please find my resume enclosed. It details my education and skills.

  • Here are some suggested corrections: Sir/Madam, I am interested in employment with your organization.
  • Please find my resume enclosed.
  • It details my education and skills.
  • References and any other information, if needed, will be promptly provided.
  • I am keen to develop my career as a Software Engineer.
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Here are some suggested corrections:

Sir/Madam,

I am interested in employment with your organization. Please find my resume enclosed. It details my education and skills. References and any other information, if needed, will be promptly provided.

I am keen to develop my career as a Software Engineer. I hope to work for an organization where I would be a valuable team me

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