In this set of material, the reading text mention a big structure called Stonehenge which built by Druids. While, the listening passage shows that how false is it according to the date. According to the reading text, Stonehenge where locates in the south of England was built by the Druids, the hight priests of Celtic culture in England, and they use this building for their religious ceremonies. In contrast, the listening passage does not agree with this common belief and time and date does not match with this belief. First of all, there are two theories that show Stonehenge was not only in England and spread out in other countries around 15 hundred B.C or 8 hundred B.C and it was a universal agreement that it built before 15 hundred B.C. In addition, according to the modern radio carbon testing, Stonehenge was built in three phases. The First phase was around three thousand B.C, second was around twenty eight hundred B.C and the third phase was around twenty one hundred B.C. in conclusion, you can see the priests did not come before these dates in to England and Stonehenge was not built by Druids.
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There are some grammatical and structural problems throughout, but your biggest problem is a logical one. If you are going to argue that, based on the dates Stonehenge was built, it couldn't have been built by Druids, you need to say when the Druids were in that part of England.
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