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Skif Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Check the sentence, please

So that the frequent pressure, humidity and temperature variations caused by the convergence between moist maritime air and dry continental air take place that creates instability which causes weather to change many times a single day.
  

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Hi, Your sentence is incorrect. It contains no main clause. It seems to be just a series of subordinate clauses.

— Clive

  • Hi, Your sentence is incorrect.
  • It contains no main clause.
  • It seems to be just a series of subordinate clauses.
  • I advise you to rewrite it using shorter sentences.
  • That will make you focus on whatever is your main point.
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Hi,

Your sentence is incorrect. It contains no main clause. It seems to be just a series of subordinate clauses.

I advise you to rewrite it using shorter sentences. That will make you focus on whatever is your main point.

Then repost it
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I've changed it. Check it again, please!!!

variant 1:

So that because of the convergence between moist maritime air and dry continental air there are frequent variations of parameters(such as pressure, humidity and temperature) that creates instability which causes weather to change many times a single day.

variant 2:

The convergence between moist maritime air a
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Hi,

I've changed it. Check it again, please!!!

variant 1:

So that because of the convergence between moist maritime air and dry continental air there are frequent variations of parameters(such as pressure, humidity and temperature) that creates instability which causes weather to change many times a single day.

Incorrect.
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