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CharmYou Posted 12 years ago
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Check the paragraph I wrote?
Hi, I wrote this paragraph. Could anyone check my wording please?
I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home, the first one to our campus. The shorter I spent my time with you, the more likely I might be missing you. Staying home hearing your constantly belittling me just makes me can’t breathe.
I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home, the first one to our campus. The shorter I spent my time with you, the more likely I might be missing you. Staying home hearing your constantly belittling me just makes me can’t breathe.
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I have underlined some problems. Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here . I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you.
- I have underlined some problems.
- Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here .
- I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you.
- I tried, without success though.
- I’m the last one hom e, th e first one to our campus.
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I have underlined some problems. Please try to fix them and post your revised paragraph here.
I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home, the first one to our campus. The shorter I spent my time with you, the more likely I might be missing you. Staying home hearing your constantly belittling
I wondered why I didn’t enjoy the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home, the first one to our campus. The shorter I spent my time with you, the more likely I might be missing you. Staying home hearing your constantly belittling
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I wondered why I hadn't enjoyed the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home, and the first one to our campus. The shorter the time I spent with you, the more likely I might miss you. Staying home hearing you constantly belittle me just makes me unable to breathe.
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Much better!
I wondered why I hadn't enjoyed the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home and the first one to our campus. The shorter the time I spend with you, the more likely I might miss you. Staying home hearing you constantly belittle me just makes me unable to breathe.
I wondered why I hadn't enjoyed the time with you. I tried, without success though. I’m the last one home and the first one to our campus. The shorter the time I spend with you, the more likely I might miss you. Staying home hearing you constantly belittle me just makes me unable to breathe.
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