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Akmal Posted 17 years ago
As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009, but no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX therefore issue has been closed by IT department.
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As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009, but no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX therefore issue has been closed by IT department.
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Hi, You have several problems here, mainly because you are trying to say too much in one long sentence. You need to write this again, in shorter senteces. Best wishes, Clive
- Hi, You have several problems here, mainly because you are trying to say too much in one long sentence.
- You need to write this again, in shorter senteces.
- Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
You have several problems here, mainly because you are trying to say too much in one long sentence. You need to write this again, in shorter senteces.
Best wishes, Clive
You have several problems here, mainly because you are trying to say too much in one long sentence. You need to write this again, in shorter senteces.
Best wishes, Clive
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As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009. But no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX. Therefore issue has been closed by IT department.
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Hi,
As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009. But no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX. Therefore issue has been closed by IT department.
As per the requirement of the Billing department, data was provided on 26/05/2009. But no response was given by the Billing department in telep
As per requirement of Billing department data had been provided on 26/05/2009. But no response given by billing Department on telephone calls and oral convesation with Mr. XYX. Therefore issue has been closed by IT department.
As per the requirement of the Billing department, data was provided on 26/05/2009. But no response was given by the Billing department in telep
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