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Akmal Posted 11 years ago
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Kindly transfer the processed report to given FTP location if it was processed in given shift, in case if it is not possible to save processed report at given shift email pending reports detail status to 'CIS operations user' to next shift, so that user received processed reports on time, in order to avoid bad impression of I.T. operations department.
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This is difficult to understand. Please rewrite it using simpler language and more sentences! Your use of "given shift" is unclear.
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This is difficult to understand.
Please rewrite it using simpler language and more sentences!
Your use of "given shift" is unclear.
Please rewrite it using simpler language and more sentences!
Your use of "given shift" is unclear.
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Kindly transfer and saved the processed report to (FTP Server location) if it was processed within scheduled time of shift (A,B,C) , in case if it is not possible to save processed report in shift email pending reports detail status to 'CIS operations user' for next shift, so that user received processed reports on time, in order to avoid bad impression of I.T. operations department
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Kindly save the processed report to the FTP Server (p:\\reports\latest) if it was processed within the scheduled time of that shift (A,B,C). If that is not possible, email the pending report (with status details) to CIS_Operations_User@gmail.com so that the next shift can complete the report processing. That way, our users will receive the processed reports on time, and will not get a bad impres
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