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Believer Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Check the grammar part of the Rules

Hi,

Let's assume the following are the Rules for the members conduct for a social club. Please check for grammar. (Should I write "the members' conduct"???) This is for writing for a "draft" purpose for a hypothetical club.

ZZZ Club's Rules for Members Conduct

Should conduct as befitting those of the members of this selective club at all times.

Must make your bed before 7 A.M.

Get to the club caferteria before 7:45 A.M. - properly attired.

Not allowed to chew gum when attending classes.

A designated member should clean the their group's bathroom once every two weeks. (Besure to get the stamp of approval from the group leader after cleaning the bathroom.)

All members should attend the scheduled classes unless a member has a legitimate excuse that has been approved by the group leader.

Wear club uniforms, properly cleaned and pressed, when in the club premises.

Members are allowed to carry cellular phones but when in class, the phones should be "Off," as not to interrupt the study.

Should show proper etiquette to all people in the club premises, whether they are members or nonmenbers.

Should go to bed at 10 P.M.
  

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Hi, I can't imagine what kind of club this is, with rules like these. I'm just looking at grammar, nothing else. Best wishes, Clive Let's assume the following are the Rules for the members conduct for a social club.

  • Hi, I can't imagine what kind of club this is, with rules like these.
  • I'm just looking at grammar, nothing else.
  • Best wishes, Clive Let's assume the following are the Rules for the members conduct for a social club.
  • Please check for grammar.
  • (Should I write "the members' conduct"???
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Hi,

I can't imagine what kind of club this is, with rules like these.

I'm just looking at grammar, nothing else.

Best wishes, Clive

Let's assume the following are the Rules for the members conduct for a social club. Please check for grammar. (Should I write "the members' conduct"??? Yes ) This is for writing for a "draft" purpose fo

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