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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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check the grammar on the following writing please.
Stephen King, as a kid, was removed from school because health problems, as a result, he was confined to his home. He found in the writing a way to open doors, as the ones were closed to him.
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As a child, Stephen King was removed from school because of health problems. As a result, he was confined to his home. While some doors were closed to him, he found a way to open other ones through his writing.
- As a child, Stephen King was removed from school because of health problems.
- As a result, he was confined to his home.
- While some doors were closed to him, he found a way to open other ones through his writing.
- By the way, I don't believe this to be factually accurate.
- He attended public school in Durham, Maine.
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As a child, Stephen King was removed from school because of health problems. As a result, he was confined to his home. While some doors were closed to him, he found a way to open other ones through his writing.
By the way, I don't believe this to be factually accurate. He attended public school in Durham, Maine.
By the way, I don't believe this to be factually accurate. He attended public school in Durham, Maine.
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Grammar GeekAs a child, Stephen King was removed from school because of health problems. As a result, he was confined to his home. While some doors were closed to him, he found a way to open others ones in his writing.others ones: t
By the way, I don't believe this to be factually accurate. He attended public school in Durham, Maine.
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I also think that "through" instead of "in" is better - I have since edited my post.
Others or other ones, but not others ones, of course.
Others or other ones, but not others ones, of course.
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