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Sebayanpendam Posted 17 years ago
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Check the grammar in my essay, please.
4 candidates consisting of 3 KRK and 3 Amanah scored A for English papers. This number equaled to that of the previous result. They are Nicholas Banyang ak Jabieng, Nur Farahain, Kelly Katty James and Mohd. Faridzuan bin Mustapha. 37 (17.79%) candidates obtained grade B, 41 (19.71%) obtained grade C and 63 (30.29%) obtained D. 63 (30.20%) candidates failed to at least achieve a minimum pass.
For grade B, 26 out of 37 were candidates from 3 KRK. Another 7 from that class passed with grade C. Only one candidate from 3 A failed to attain a minimum pass out of 34. Other classes too contributed to the increase in the pass rate with at least grade D.
Overall, the result showed an increase by 2.24% per cent from the previous year or 69.71%. However, it didn’t hit the target of 83.255% ) as stated in the Expected Target Result (ETR).
The target for this year (2009) is 71 per cent. The target cannot be too ambitious. It has to be set according to the students’ current achievements. However, the teachers involved have to put in more extra efforts to keep the pass rate up for the next exams, though minimal.
thanks
For grade B, 26 out of 37 were candidates from 3 KRK. Another 7 from that class passed with grade C. Only one candidate from 3 A failed to attain a minimum pass out of 34. Other classes too contributed to the increase in the pass rate with at least grade D.
Overall, the result showed an increase by 2.24% per cent from the previous year or 69.71%. However, it didn’t hit the target of 83.255% ) as stated in the Expected Target Result (ETR).
The target for this year (2009) is 71 per cent. The target cannot be too ambitious. It has to be set according to the students’ current achievements. However, the teachers involved have to put in more extra efforts to keep the pass rate up for the next exams, though minimal.
thanks
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First, a sentence cannot be started with a number. If you need to start with 4, then it must be "Four". candidates failed to at least achieve a minimum pass.
- First, a sentence cannot be started with a number.
- If you need to start with 4, then it must be "Four".
- candidates failed to at least achieve a minimum pass.
- " Other classes also contributed (may be better word) However, the teachers involved have to put in more extra efforts to keep the minimal pass rate up for the next exams.
- Hope this helps, K =^^=
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First, a sentence cannot be started with a number. If you need to start with 4, then it must be "Four".
candidates failed to at least achieve a minimum pass.
This might be better said "candidates failed to achieve at least a minimum pass."
Other classes also contributed (may be better word)
However, the teachers involved have to put inmore
candidates failed to at least achieve a minimum pass.
This might be better said "candidates failed to achieve at least a minimum pass."
Other classes also contributed (may be better word)
However, the teachers involved have to put in
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