"We actively work towards sustained growth of human capital by proselytizing the replacement of antiquated learning practices by constructive novel formulas that are more conducive to growth."
I constructed this sentence. Though, I am not sure it's 100% grammatically correct. Plus, I want feedback on the usage of words and their suitability. Should I use it as it is or make some changes?
Should "formulas" be replaced by "methods", "antiquated" by some other word, and "novel" by new?
FatimaSaboor123 Though, I am not sure it's 100% grammatically correct. It is grammatically correct. FatimaSaboor123 the usage of words and their suitability It sounds like someone went through a rare words dictionary and cobbled them together in a desperate attempt to portray themselves as erudite and sagacious.
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FatimaSaboor123Though, I am not sure it's 100% grammatically correct.
It is grammatically correct.
FatimaSaboor123the usage of words and their suitability
It sounds like someone went through a rare words dictionary and cobbled them together in a desperate attempt to portray themselves as erudite and sagacious. It i