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Decibel Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Check Punctuation & Wording

Hi,

Do I need a comma before the highlighted and?
Does the snippet or related engineering industries sound correct for the sentence?

Thanks

My ambition is to secure a full-time position in the electronics, software or related engineering industries, so that I can further improve my technical and non-technical skills and learn about all aspects of the industry.
  

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decibel Do I need a comma before the highlighted and? No. decibel Does the snippet or related engineering industries sound correct for the sentence?

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  • decibel Do I need a comma before the highlighted and?
  • No.
  • decibel Does the snippet or related engineering industries sound correct for the sentence?
  • Not really.
  • Why don't you just say "a full-time position in computer engineering"?
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decibelDo I need a comma before the highlighted and?
No.
decibelDoes the snippet or related engineering industries sound correct for the sentence?
Not really. Why don't you just say "a full-time position in computer engineering"? That covers software and hardware.
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