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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
check pls!
Hi, everybody!
Grammar check please:
“Referring to what we spoke last time about the school bus matter, have you got the information that i requested for? Please notify as soon as your convenience.”
Thank you!
Grammar check please:
“Referring to what we spoke last time about the school bus matter, have you got the information that i requested for? Please notify as soon as your convenience.”
Thank you!
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Surely, miyabi, you have seen us write many times about the pronoun "I". It is always written as a capital letter. Your sentence is very wordy, and difficult to read.
- Surely, miyabi, you have seen us write many times about the pronoun "I".
- It is always written as a capital letter.
- Your sentence is very wordy, and difficult to read.
- Do you want to write in a more business-like style?
- Please try again, and then I can give it a final check.
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Surely, miyabi, you have seen us write many times about the pronoun "I". It is always written as a capital letter.
Your sentence is very wordy, and difficult to read. Do you want to write in a more business-like style?
Please try again, and then I can give it a final check.
Note: we do not use "for" after the verb "request." And "notify" should have an indirect object.
Your sentence is very wordy, and difficult to read. Do you want to write in a more business-like style?
Please try again, and then I can give it a final check.
Note: we do not use "for" after the verb "request." And "notify" should have an indirect object.
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“Concerning about the school bus matter, have you got the information that I requested upon? Please notisfy me as soon as your convence.” thank you.
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