Check plis the essay Rob

Rob can you check this essay plis I know that there are not 250 words but plis can you check it plis and put a "Nota" plis thanks

Topic:The International Community should reduce or eliminate the debts > of
the world´s poorest countries.
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> Essay: Around the world there are a lot of poor countries. Africa in the >
continent that has the most poor countries all over the world, for > example
Ruanda and Somalia. Like all the rest of the countries, they > have debts to
pay.
> Is hard to accept to me that poor countries has to paid the >
international debts because, the reduce the incomes of money to make > some
changes inside their countries, because they have to pay the > debts.In my
opinion is they eliminate the debts for poor countries is > the oportunitie to
grow up, because if that happened the country can > focus to produce money only
for them. Other thing is if they make some > money they can become a safety and
big country to made inversion and > made some international bussines, so they
can have big incomes of money, > and finally make a poor country in a big
country
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> Tasks 2:
> Topic: It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not resposive to > rapidly
changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason > younger
workers are to be preferred.
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> Essay: To has 50 years is a problem in this times? In many parts of the >
world old workers it can be a problem because in some times they can´t > no
sutisfade the spectatives of the industries.
> For me is hard to accept that, because is important to has a >
older workers in a industry, because they has the experience to make > some
important desicions.In other cases he has the "madures" to hand out > the
industries if there are in troubles. In the other side we have young > workers
with new ideas.I can said that older or younger workers can´t > work at the same
time, because in one side we have experience and in the > other side we have
new ideas, so I can said that both are important and > age is not also to, its
the way that we works.