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Marina2805 Posted 11 years ago
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Check please my letter!?

Dear nastay,
I am writing to tell you my wonderful news.
Today my sister has presented me a ticket on the concert of my favorite band and I was very happy. My sister and I will go to the concert. My parents have bought tickets to my favorite city Lviv.
I am really happy with such gifts. How are you?
  

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Dear nastay, I am writing to tell you my wonderful news. Today my sister gave has presented me a ticket to a concert that my favorite band is giving, and I am very happy. My sister and I will go to the concert.

  • Dear nastay, I am writing to tell you my wonderful news.
  • Today my sister gave has presented me a ticket to a concert that my favorite band is giving, and I am very happy.
  • My sister and I will go to the concert.
  • My parents have bought train / bus / airplane tickets to my favorite city Lviv.
  • I am really happy with such gifts.
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Dear nastay,
I am writing to tell you my wonderful news.
Today my sister gave has presented me a ticket to a concert that my favorite band is giving, and I am very happy. My sister and I will go to the concert. My parents have bought train / bus / airplane tickets to my favorite city Lviv.
I am really happy with such gift
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I have nothing else to add to AS's response other than: "Please check my letter" (not "Check please my letter").

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