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Dado Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hello everyone. My english is not so good so I need help. As you can see here I have text not so big but I think it is not grammatical correct. Well. Can you help me and correct. Thanks.

Mail
I accept only Yahoo! Mail and G-Mail. I don't accept other mail addresses. If you try to register with any other mail I will delete your account and you won’t receive award. If you win and your mail isn’t Yahoo! Mail or G-mail you won’t receive award. You MUST give you real mail address so you can confirm it.

Private Information

You don’t need to give me your private information except your name and surname. If you win I will contact you and we will discuss the details.



Points

I WON’T give points to anyone. Every user gets 10 points when they register themselves. I’m checking points all the time.

Winner

Winner is person who collects the most points and that person will receive money. Before I give money I will check all points. ONLY the winner gets money.

Account

You MUSTN’T have 2 or more accounts. I have right to do with your account whatever I want (deletes it, change it or suspend it.).

If you try to trick me I will delete your account immediately and ban your IP address.

Collected money I will split on 3 parts. 45% - 40% - 15%

I guarantee:

45% - will go to charitable organization - WSPA

45% - to me

10% - to you (winner)



You mustn’t put banners on this websites:
  • Violent content, racial intolerance, or advocacy against any individual, group, or organization
  • Pornography, adult, or mature content
  • Hacking/cracking content
  • Illicit drugs and drug paraphernalia
  • Excessive profanity
  • Gambling or casino-related content
  • Content regarding programs which compensate users for clicking on ads or offers, performing searches, surfing websites, or reading emails
  • Excessive, repetitive, or irrelevant keywords in the content or code of web pages
  • Deceptive or manipulative content or construction to improve your site's search engine ranking, e.g., your site's PageRank
  • Sales or promotion of weapons or ammunition (e.g., firearms, fighting knives, stun guns)
  • Sales or promotion of beer or hard alcohol
  • Sales or promotion of tobacco or tobacco-related products
  • Sales or promotion of prescription drugs
  • Sales or promotion of products that are replicas or imitations of designer goods
  • Sales or distribution of term papers or student essays
  • Any other content that is illegal, promotes illegal activity, or infringes on the legal rights of others
Banner

You CAN put banners on forum (signature), on your website and anywhere else until you don’t break this rules or rules on page where you put banner.

You MUST use default banners, you MUSTN’T use your banners or change my banners.
When I found out you broke rules I will delete your account.
Don’t forget I can see from where you get clicks. If you try to trick me in any way I will delete your account

Owners of websites can tell me if you break the rules.

Site

Everything on this site is free. You don’t need to pay for anything.

Money

Maybe you want to know how I will collect money. Well… Look around and ask yourself what you see on this site. This website will be online as long as I want. It’s my decision how much money I will collect.

User’s rules:

You won’t:
  1. Break rules
  2. Change banners in any way (their look and size)
  3. Have 2 or more accounts
  4. Cheat in any way (to get points…)
For all questions you can ask on FORUM or CONTACT ME.

Rules can be changed in anytime.
  

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Hi,

I think I looked at this before, in an earlier thread, and offered you my opinion that it was written too negatively, much too much in the form of orders and prohibitions. If I read something like this, I would think that this person sounds far too 'bossy'. I would simply go to another website that seemed more friendly.

Perhaps someone else will offer you the grammar advice t

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