Check paragraph

Hello everybody,

can someone help me checking the following paragraph?

I compare the results for the heat transfer by radiation (radiation heat transfer) and the heat transfer by convection (convection heat transfer) taking into account this correction and without taking it into account. The comparison is realized for several projects. The comparison is showed in pictures Fig. 1-10. For the projects BMCR, FUZ and Puente Nuevo, the comparison is only realized for the first duct of the boiler.

Thanks,