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"It was a Sunday morning. Thunder, Lightning and the heavy downpour accompanied my psych. Almost everyone had an umbrella. The cars splashed water as they drove by. The traffic lights turned red. I crossed the street with my hands on my pockets. A car hit its brakes as hit almost hit me. I just kept walking."
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"It was a Sunday morning. ) and the heavy downpour accompanied my psych . ) Almost everyone had an umbrella.
- "It was a Sunday morning.
- ) and the heavy downpour accompanied my psych .
- ) Almost everyone had an umbrella.
- The cars splashed water as they drove by.
- The traffic lights turned red.
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"It was a Sunday morning. Thunder, Lightning (Lightening is a common noun.) and the heavy downpour accompanied my psych. (I don't know what you mean here.) Almost everyone had an umbrella. The cars splashed water as they drove by. The traffic lights turned red. I crossed the street with
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