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Rajiv Thota Posted 21 years ago
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IRASCIBLES
Its time for the irascibles to show their decourness in the society.Though it is strenuous activity for the peevish, the outcomes are hazardous.Decisions they take are indespensible of obfusication that recipes himself into a trauma.These generally find their works to be perilous and often giveup in the middle. The mind of these barely misses peace.They get easily exasperated with a little discomfort and apparently its the time for the people around to show their decourousness to pacify the situation.These should adapt to the acrid circumstances they envisage to occur.
Any suggestions and comments are kindly welcomed.
Its time for the irascibles to show their decourness in the society.Though it is strenuous activity for the peevish, the outcomes are hazardous.Decisions they take are indespensible of obfusication that recipes himself into a trauma.These generally find their works to be perilous and often giveup in the middle. The mind of these barely misses peace.They get easily exasperated with a little discomfort and apparently its the time for the people around to show their decourousness to pacify the situation.These should adapt to the acrid circumstances they envisage to occur.
Any suggestions and comments are kindly welcomed.
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Hi Rajiv, Some of your word choices are making this difficult to understand. It is not good writing to always pick the longest/most complex word - this would be better written with simpler, more 'everyday' language. I also think that some of your choices do not mean quite what you think.
- Hi Rajiv, Some of your word choices are making this difficult to understand.
- It is not good writing to always pick the longest/most complex word - this would be better written with simpler, more 'everyday' language.
- I also think that some of your choices do not mean quite what you think.
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- Though it is strenuous activity - though it is hard work
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Hi Rajiv,
Some of your word choices are making this difficult to understand. It is not good writing to always pick the longest/most complex word - this would be better written with simpler, more 'everyday' language. I also think that some of your choices do not mean quite what you think. (recipes is completely wrong and I'm not sure what you mean by decourness?)
e.g. Though it
Some of your word choices are making this difficult to understand. It is not good writing to always pick the longest/most complex word - this would be better written with simpler, more 'everyday' language. I also think that some of your choices do not mean quite what you think. (recipes is completely wrong and I'm not sure what you mean by decourness?)
e.g. Though it
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