Check my writing, please? Writing my first statement of purpose. My first try.

The international bachelor degree of agriculture will give me an oppotunity to work overseas throughout europe and be able to grow strong crops. Due to the nature of this program, I think it is the only program that I can success.

Food scientist is on high demand. People want new Food that is nutitious. I want to be a Food scientist so I can help them produce healthy food.

I join a coursework to prepare myself for the programe when I was a high school student. In addition, I did very well in food tech class in my school, I got straight As. Science is my dominant subject. I got a certificate for being top in class.

Also, I spent countless time dabbling with ingredients to make Food that is sublime. It was fun mixing things up.

In my future, Ill be working in a top food company in Germany. Then, Ill take a higher education of agriculture. (Master degree)

I am sure that your program will make me a professional food scientist and be able to produce and distribute food to suit those who are in need of food.