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The First Day at University.

The first day at university can be an exciting day that every student probably can't forget its story. It may be considered to be fascinating and exciting because it seems like a bridge between your school days and a new stage of your education after somewhat 12 years of study.Personally, I remember how impatient I was looking forward to seeing the university environment. Teachers were all friendly and I always look up to them for their honest effort.

However, there is a substantial difference between school environment and university; it is the kind of unlimited freedom that students experience at that span of life which is parallel with their beginning of adulthood. You are considered to be independent and expected to act like and adult. Nobody is going to look after you or check your presence and affairs as severely as it used to be. You should find your own way towards the right destination.

Anyhow, there are some disadvantages with this freedom because it happens so sudden and radical after school. I look down on this fast rule transition and think it would be more efficient if it happened gradually until the student could be called a sophomore.