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Candidate For Mayor.

Two politicians with different political views are competing for mayoral chair. Daniel baker, a democrat, has been in charge of this position since four years ago. He is one of our nominees. His rival, Gabriela Soto, is a republican and is trying to defeat him in this election.
Daniel baker mostly emphasizes on education. He thinks that the more educated people we have, the more our citizens can take advantage of job opportunities. Baker's next strategy is housing for better living conditions.
On the other side, Gabriela Soto has a quite different idea compared to her opponent. She thinks of a city with the least crime and criminals. Secondly, She wants to improve the economic situation. Cutting down the rate of taxes is her solution to achieve this goal.
However, they both criticize one another's opinions to attract more voters.
  

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Persian Learner Candidate F or M ayor. Candidate f or m ayor. Persian Learner for mayoral chair.

  • Persian Learner Candidate F or M ayor.
  • Candidate f or m ayor.
  • Persian Learner for mayoral chair.
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Persian LearnerCandidate For Mayor.
Candidate for mayor.
Persian Learnerfor mayoral chair.
This is odd. What do you mean?
Persian LearnerDaniel baker, a democrat, has been in c
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Persian LearnerBaker's next strategy is housing for better living conditions.
Baker's next strategy is to focus on housing, including better living conditions.
Persian LearnerShe thinks of a city with the
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If he improve the school system of this city,the citizens of this great city could occupy many new jobs.

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