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Speakerleo Posted 9 years ago
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Check my writing if it is correct

Please check my writing if it is correct. I can learn from error in order to improve my english writing. Thanks.
My boss is the most troublesome person in the world. He often makes me do this and do that. He not only the one has intelligent but also I have. I don't find any reason why we can not be the same. We all are here to make money.
  

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My boss is the most troublesome person in the world because he orders me around. I don't know why I can't be the boss. I am just as intelligent as he is and we all are here to make money.

  • My boss is the most troublesome person in the world because he orders me around.
  • I don't know why I can't be the boss.
  • I am just as intelligent as he is and we all are here to make money.
  • the "we all are here to make moeny" doesn't really support the message of your sentences.
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My boss is the most troublesome person in the world because he orders me around. I don't know why I can't be the boss. I am just as intelligent as he is and we all are here to make money.

the "we all are here to make moeny" doesn't really support the message of your sentences.

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