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This evening I'm going to a cafeteria which is the very first time I being there and I'm going to invite my friend to a cafeteria too. I heard from a grape vine that they have got pizzas and a free buffet. I'm not sure if my friend's free or not. If he is free I'll go. If he isn't, I won't. This is gonna be the best moment of my life. I'm starving already.
In 6th grade, we were studying Maths and my friend, Drake putted in a wrong notebook. He supposed to take note on his Maths notebook but he accidentally wrote in his English notebook. Our Maths teacher was very mad when she found out. Drake is kind of a short fuse person. He easily angry when someone mess with him. The teacher was verbally abused him so hard for writing in a wrong notebook. Drake was angried and punched her in the face. His stupidity got him into trouble; He got expelled from school.
My friend invited me to a party last night, but I was in thick of things so I cancelled the invitation.
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I'v marked in yellow some parts you should correct. There are others, but first try to correct these, and then post again for further cmments. OK?
- I'v marked in yellow some parts you should correct.
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- This evening I'm going to a cafeteria which is the very first time I being there and I'm going to invite my friend to a cafeteria too.
- I heard from a grape vine that they have got pizzas and a free buffet.
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