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Last night I was very tired, I didn’t go out and I didn’t watch television. I went to bed early. This morning I got up at 5 o’clock, I jogged about half an hour and then I went home, took a bath, had breakfast and I came to school at 7:15 because today is the first day of the new course. I will persevere in my study to look forward to having a bright future.

Lisadove · Accepted Answer

The third sentence is a little too long. I would say:
"... and then I went home, took a bath, and had breakfast. I came to school at ...."
Saying "I came to school" implies that you are still at school and you are writing from there.

"I will persevere in my studies so that I can look forward to having a bright future."

Abil · Answer

Last night I was very tired, I didn’t go out and I didn’t watch television. I went to bed early. (As I was very tired last night, I neither went out nor watched television; but went to bed early.)

This morning I got up at 5 o’clock, I jogged about half an hour and then I went home, took a bath,
( This morning I got up at 5 o'clock and after jogging for about half an hour I went back home and took a bath.)

had breakfast and I came to school at 7:15 because today is the first day of the new course. I will persevere in my study to look forward to having a bright future.
(After having breakfast, I came to scholl at 7:15 because today is the first day of our new course. I will persevere in my studies so that I can look forward to having a bright future.)

Note: I think the original has no grammatical errors but has too many "Is" which seems awkward. Try to avoid this. Thanks.

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