Check my sentence structure test please

Three out of five wrong! Not so good.

Ooops. My bad.

In #129, could my choice(#3) be corrected this way?

It is rare for an individual to functio

Persian LearnerIn #129, could my choice(#3) be corrected this way?It is rare for an individual to function effectively on sleep fewer than 6 hours per night.

Yes. The omission of "to" is what made that choice wrong. Good catch.
Nevertheless, the end is not good either.

to function effectively on fewe

What about my choice in #128?

The scientist's prediction strikes many as a peculiar notion that humans will soon become part machine.

correct?

Does "peculiar notion" simply mean a strange opinion?

And in #126:

The validity of the permit is one year from date of issue, and it maybe renewed at that time.

Correct?

And one more question; how does the meaning of the sentence change if I put 'the' before 'date'?

The validity of the permit is one year from the date of issue, and it maybe renewed at that time.

Persian LearnerDoes "peculiar notion" simply mean a strange opinion?

Yes, that's the general idea.

Persian LearnerThe scientist's prediction strikes many as a peculiar notion that humans will soon become part machine.

It's correct grammatically, but it's not quite idiomatic to say "a peculiar notion that ...". It doesn't co

Persian LearnerThe validity of the permit is one year from date of issue, and it maybe may be [two words] renewed at that time.

This isn't correct. It's not "validity" that should be the subject, because later it says "it" may be renewed. We don't renew the validity; we renew the permit. So the sentence should

I don't know how I would survive without your help my dear teacher, CalifJim. My appreciation is beyond expression.